Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Unraveled- Story Change

If there was anything in the story, Unraveled, that I would change, it would have to be the fact that Mary Ann is a drainer. They seem to be hated amongst every other magical creature out there and I feel like it means that the love that Riley and Mary Ann share for each other is doomed to death.

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  1. Great point. Do you hope their love succeeds? Expand a little on this.

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  2. I do hope it succeeds, mainly because I don't know how the story would unfold if they weren't together. Plus I like the fact that Mary Ann has practically always had a supernatural ability that she didn't even know about. She could use that to her advantage and help her friends fight off enemies, like she's been wanting to do. Instead of being someone who's always in the way as she says.

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